Is the only grammar mistake i find
This is awsome :'D!!
Jeje i didn't know
Comment tu vas représenter tous les freaks ensemble et tout !
Vivement de tenir le fanzine en main !
Dearly fits fine. Much would take away the formality. They are aristocrats; they speak more formally than commoners. I tend to speak a bit more formally, so "If you want a husband that dearly" sounds perfect for someone who is upper class.
Proofing comes not only with looking at grammatical errors, but taking a look at characters and how those characters would speak. Changing a word really can flip a character's status! It's something for you to keep in the back of your head when you look at a piece where someone doesn't speak English natively.
I come from a background where linguistics, linguistics among society, how words and grammar change over the years in a society, etymology and learning languages is a pastime (my mom is a linguist and we all caught the bug from her. She took Spanish in high school and German, Russian, Arabic and Chinese in college. My brother took German and I took French.) I also spent eight years in speech therapy learning to speak properly from having Autism, so I have a fairly formal way of speaking. Coming from that background, I see translation from that sociolinguistics lens which my mom specializes in. When looking at comics, I look at the backgrounds as well as the characters and how they dress and work with wording that way. I try to take in the whole scope before I work on correction. That's just my way of working with translation and correction. You may have an entirely different way of working!
It wasn't a way to be rude at all (which is I think the way you took it.) Translation and proofing--especially proofing in translation of a non-English text--is an ongoing debate. How I translate and proof can be completely different from yours. That's why when two translators work together on a piece of literature, it can be heaven or hell.
its so pretty! i can't wait for more!
J'ai hâte de voir ce que ça va donner ce Circus ! >3<